Poundage? That's barely a blurb. (assuming you're referring to the neighborhood comments rather than repair addendum).
And right now, the Santa Rosa blurb is kind of clumsy because I haven't gotten 'round to tuning it up.
I've been working two very rural areas for the last 5 or 6 years and I feel more comfortable writing slightly more elaborate descriptions and explanations. Most reports have 3 comment addendum pages with no boilerplate, formatted roughly like: Neighborhood boundaries with some detail about the neighborhood, description of the general area (city or community or region,etc), market conditions, zoning and HBU, descriptions of the site and of the improvements, summary of the sales comparison, a small paragraph for each of the sales/listing comps presented, perhaps a paragraphy about properties not presented, a reconciliation of the sales approach.
Doing it this way seems to keep underwriting questions and demands to an almost non-existent level. No matter how weird the property or how bad the comps are.
But I haven't done an appraisal in the Santa Rosa area in quite some time and on top of that, the property is very difficult... especially for an FHA assignment. And the market conditions in this quadrant of Santa Rosa appear to at odds with the rest of the area.
My description of much of the stuff that is in those information sources are not really of interest to the reader. If that is the norm, then I understand why "appraisal stripping" is going on.
Wayne... it's a temporary comment until I get back to it.
Rufus... thank you very much.